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Doctor Who

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The Doctor was lying on the metal floor of the TARDIS. 'It's not working,' he thought to himself. 'I can't remember her face.'
He started yelling and kicking. He lifted himself up and walked to the room she used to sleep in. His brain could not control his body anymore. He kneeled next to the bed and rested his head on the soft blanket. Tears were bathing his face. His voice broke out and he was sobbing.
Swoosh.
The Doctor raised his head and looked to the left. There she was. A rusty, foggy ghost image of Rose.
"No!" he yelled and buried his face back into the covers of the bed.
"Doctor, don't cry," Rose almost whispered. "I'm here."
"It's impossible. I used the last of the breach. I'm dreaming." He closed his eyes tightly, and tears fell from his face.
"You aren't. I found the last opening this time."
"THIS time," the Doctor chuckled.
Rose grinned and crossed her arms. "That's what I'm talking about! A little laugh."
"How am I supposed to laugh when you aren't here? When you're not around to make me even smile? I thought losing my planet was the end of me, but now I've lost everything!"
"Doctor, don't talk like that. I'm right here."
The Doctor looked around the room in a daze, and then gave a steady look to Rose. "How long?"
"About two minutes."
The Doctor laughed a soft, crazy laugh.
"What is it?" Rose asked.
"Just a little deja vu."
Rose and The Doctor both smiled at each other and broke into laughter. Rose's laughter soon turned to crying. "It isn't funny! I want to see you forever, but I'll never see you again! Remember when I said I'd never never leave you? What happened to that?!"
The Doctor went as close to Rose (or rather, Rose's image) as he could. "Rose, it'll be okay. Remember before I regenerated, before the time vortex? Remember when I told you if there's one way to remember me, it's to have a FANTASTIC life? Rose, I still want you to have a fantastic life."
"Doctor... how am I supposed to have a fantastic life without you?"
"You'll find your way."
"I love you, Doctor. I love you so much!"
He brushed his fingers through his hair, uneasy. "Rose, this is the last time I'll see you. Right? I mean, what if there's still another opening? What if we--"
"Damn it, Doctor! Just say it!"
The Doctor held his breath and focused in on Rose. He thought about what to say, but couldn't think straight. He shook his head and looked into her eyes. "Rose Tyler, I... I love you. I love YOU. I will always cry over you, and I will always miss you. But promise me you'll have a fantastic life."
"I promise!"
"Plus, you still have Mickey..."
...They were silent. For once in their lives, they had no idea what to say to each other.
The Doctor reached his hand to touch Rose. As he did so, she started to fade. "Good bye, Doctor," she said.
"Good bye, Rose."
She disappeared forever this time. The Doctor fell to his knees and began to cry.
So I'm really heartbroken over Doctor Who. And I mean, I've never felt so much pain before. I know it's a fictional story, but it made me cry nonetheless. I've cried for hours now.
But anyways. I figure if I write my own ending, maybe it'll help me feel better. So I've written something that ties up loose ends. It's still extremely sad and makes me cry, but it makes things feel more secure.

I know their dialogue sounds a bit cheesy, but that's honestly the kind of things they'd say. So, please don't think it's cheesy.
And it goes kind of fast, because it's made up of mostly dialogue. It doesn't describe how they're talking or what they're doing in between speech. But I guess you just have to imagine. Maybe if you've ever seen the show, it'd be easier.
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Neroscourgea's avatar
Omg I'm crying... the feels