Who's that one about?

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Maybe we'll come back some day.

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Maybe we'll come back some day.

gorgeous.
i love it all.
all i would suggest is moving from present tense to past tense, just to give that subjective feeling, ya know...something a bit more intimate that others can't understand.
buuuut that's just me

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Nod your head and grin.

OH YOU.
I almost wanted to hit you when I read "tobacco tongues" because I was writing a poem and it's called No Smoking. Well right now it is. I might change it.
But you know, that phase is probably better than all of my poem, so I don't really mind.
Ha! I was about to say "by the way, I have a new deviantart" and yadada, but then I realised I was commenting with it. I AM INSPIRED. I feel so panicked about it, because it feels like AHHHHHH so good but I feel like I have to rush rush rush before the feeling flees from my body. Which just cannot happen.

BUT ANYWAY.
I love this I love this I love it.
(Also, I'm listening to Sunday Girl right now, and I don't know, it really makes me want to be listening to it with you. I've no idea why. I turned my iTunes down a little while I was commenting and then I heard it change to this song, and I turned it up, and I just thought "It'd be so groovy if I were hanging out with Courtney with this song playing" and okay you get the message.)


It all really fits together so well. I keep trying to pick out a favourite line but I love them all. I don't know but it makes me think of like, a really ignorant admired person saying something, something really serious, but they just say it like it's a joke, and the most serious part they make the punchline. And I don't know why. But that's what this poem made me think of. Which confuses me because it's not like I read this poem and think that's what it's about. It's just where my mind went. O_o
I lovvvvvvvve it.

...It's octavia, if you hadn't already guessed XD
Even if it says "Charlotte" on my profile. I've never really posted my writing online (apart from a few times on the Katy boards), and when i have (apart from that) it's been under a pseudonym. I'm actually using it on LJ too now...I don't want anyone from school finding it.
So it SAYS Charlotte, but you know it's me. and it's not particularly inventive, but it's one of my middle names and...I like it. ^_^

are you sticking your tongue out cause you think you know the answer? or because you're being silly? haha. there are like three words that represent you.

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Cigarette burns and everyone hurts...

thank you yeah. i know what you mean, but i think i don't even understand most of the time haha. but yeah, i think sometimes i'll try to put it in past tense, so it will start that way and it slowly goes into present tense. it's sort of weird.

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Cigarette burns and everyone hurts...

that's because i am ignorant

i knew it was you as soon as i started reading this, haha.
Keep your title!
Oh I am sosososo glad you're inspired. So glad. Keep writing! And you better submit or at least send them to me.
I wish that a lot too. And it sucks. I try not to think about how much we should just be hanging out. All the time. There are diary entries going on and on about how much we should just be going to school together and hanging out every day.

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Cigarette burns and everyone hurts...

It's a cute name. You're gonna be all famous, publishing books left and right, under the name Charlotte, and I'm gonna know wo it is

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Cigarette burns and everyone hurts...